On Friday the last week I went out with my dad. We went to Sylvia Park and to town. I LOVE going out with my dad during the holidays because he always buys me something. We normally catch the bus to town but not that day, we caught the train. I was wondering why we caught the train my dad wouldn’t tell me. I thought we were going to town but no. We caught the train to Sylvia Park.
I was so excited as we got to Sylvia Park because I saw these AWESOME Nike Air Jordans at Foot Locker. Every time I go to Sylvia Park I HAVE to go to Foot Locker and we usually do. The shoes that I wanted were on the shelves and made noticed them. “Raenan come here” he said. “Yeah ok dad” I replied back. “Do you want these shoes?” he asked. “ Umm... Yeah definitely!” We asked the lady if we could check the price of them. I thought that the shoes would have been around $200 dollars because they are Air Jordans. The lady came back and said, the shoes are $140 dollars “We’ll get them” My dad said. I was thanking my dad every second of the day for buying me those shoes. “Where are we going next?” I asked. “ do you want to go to town now?” he asked. “Yeah I don’t mind”.
We traveled all the way to town. “What do you want to eat?” My dad asked me. “Can I have Burger King please” I asked. “Yeah sure” he replied. As we walked to Burger King I saw this man standing on a stool holding onto strings that were attached to a skeleton body singing into a microphone. It was funny seeing a skeleton sing, you don’t see that everyday. My stomach started to rumble. “Dad, can we go now?” I asked. “Yeah, we can” he said. I was so hungry. My dad bought me a triple cheese burger meal. It was delicious. There wasn’t anything else to do in town so we decided to go home.
I enjoyed my time with my dad on Friday, it was fun!.
Wow Raenan,
ReplyDeleteSounds like you had an awesome day out with your Dad, a singing skeleton would be an interesting sight :p
Something you could look at is when you are writing dialogue, make sure that when the next person speaks you put it on the next line down so it separates who is speaking.
Great to see you writing in the hollidays, Keep it up :) Mr. Hutchings